Tomorrow Ruapotaka School students and teachers will be travelling by bus to the Auckland Botanical Gardens. We will be observing many different types of flowers and also learning new things about plants. The area I want to visit is the Rose garden. Why? Because roses have awesome colours and also because they smell beautiful. I can't wait to spend the day out with my school at the Botanical Gardens tomorrow.Wednesday, 12 October 2016
Auckland Botanical Gardens
Tomorrow Ruapotaka School students and teachers will be travelling by bus to the Auckland Botanical Gardens. We will be observing many different types of flowers and also learning new things about plants. The area I want to visit is the Rose garden. Why? Because roses have awesome colours and also because they smell beautiful. I can't wait to spend the day out with my school at the Botanical Gardens tomorrow.
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Hi Ana,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy that you've expanded on your vocabulary. I also really enjoyed the way that you added in examples to why you wanted to see the rose garden. One thing I think you need to work on is maybe adding in a WALT in your description and maybe adding in some effective colours to catch your audience's attention. But Apart from that, Keep up the great work ! E noho ra